Hey everyone its been a while! We have been working on poetry since the start of term three! anyways here is my work :)
Wednesday, September 15, 2021
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i like how you did your i wish poem and your comparison poem realy describeing and on your i wish poem persificaly what bird you want and how you wish for you and freind to have unlimeted credit cards and for all sicknesses to be gone overall i liked evrey thing
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ReplyDeleteello elise, i really enjoyed your comparison -mythical tree poem, it's really intresting, i also really loved the photo!!!
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Thanks Renae!! You made me feel really good about my writing!! <3
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