Hello! sorry for the late post everyone its been buzy in lock down. but i made a sound poem for when your sick.so here it is!
Monday, August 30, 2021
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Wow Elise, you have painted a very vivid picture in your poem, it really appeals to the sense of hearing. Great sound poem! Keep it up! You said you've been busy during lockdown, what else have you been up to?
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ReplyDeleteHope you and your bubble are doing well. I love you sick poem and you have created an image in my head. Did anyone help you? Or did you do this on your own. Great work.
Mrs T
Hi Elise, Ka Pai! What a great poem. Is the sound poem your favourite to write? You have done a great job. I'd love to see some other poems on here from you. I hope you are having fun in your bubble. Take care Elise. Michelle
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